The Haircut by Lusty Soul
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
We reconnect a well known character in this short again. It is Lucy again, who awe already met in Spicy Dinner for Three, but you do not have to read that book first.
What starts as another adventure for our pansexual human with the soul of a succubus ends up with more than just one revelation.
I can't really go that much into details with this short. I definitely liked it more than its predecessor, however it has a few weaknesses that makes me give it only four stars. But as short always seem to lack something for me, it's probably the highest rating one can get.
Personally, for me happened too much in these 44 pages and had two contingency problems.
(view spoiler)[Both are miraculously clean after a successful hand job. No paper towels needed.
And secondly, when Aaron resurfaces, what he says "So you are the demon corrupting him?" doesn't make sense to me, because they literally met. But that's not the most illogical part:
Sure, that he reconsiders to seeking them out after storming off is comprehensible. But HOW could he come up with the idea to check that exact alley and find them? It's too far-fetched for me. It means that he must have stalked them. But why wait until they have finished their second sexual encounter? Also Aaron's extreme violent outbreak doesn't fit to the patience he has to have to search and find them. (hide spoiler)]
These would normally be enough to strip another star, but I liked the whole story too much, especially because it's emotionally satisfying and that is something hard to achieve in a short.
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